Wraith Encounter (Fanfiction - Radio Transmission)

DATA FILE 10.20.2552/02:17CST/RECORDING: ACTIVE
NAVCOM/OPEN FREQUENCY/428BAT
E4281: Echo 6, we’ve got movement on the west bank, how copy?
E4286: Uhh, roger that Echo 1. Acquiring IFF.
E4286: Echo 1 those tags are a negative. Request immediate welcome action.
E4281: Affirmative, Echo 6. Echo 3 through 6, open up the Red Carpet.
E4284: They’ve got a Wraith tank, advise heavy weapons!
E4281: Copy that, Echo 4. Roll out the New Mombasa special.

WEAPON REGISTRATION: Weapon/Anti-Vehicle Model 6 Grindell/Galilean Nonlinear Rifle TAG 28931G
E4284: Oh yeah! That’s a positive hit. They’re scrap metal.
E4285: Baby Kongs, approaching from the south. I count five.
E4281: Roger that, Echo 5. Any Grunts accompanying?
E4285: That’s a negative, Echo 1.
E4281: Roger that. Move to intercept on my-

CONTACT LOST: E4282; E4284; E4286

E4281: What the hell was that!?
E4283: Sir, Bravo squad was hit with a plasma mortar salvo, unknown location!
E4285: Contact! Three Wraith tanks firing from Sector 5, elevation 408!
E4281: How the hell’d they get up there?
E4285: I don’t know sir, but they’re raining hell on us.
E4281: All units, fall back to NAV point Charlie, regroup and request bombing run via C709.
E4285: Roger that, making the call.

CARPETBOMB REQUEST RECEIVED: LOG 2:30CST
PENDING…




REQUEST ACCEPTED, C709 EN ROUTE

E4285: Sir we got incoming!
E4281: Friendly?
E4285: Roger that, sir.
E4283: Hit the deck!

UNSTABLE CONNECTION/CONTACT LOST
ATTEMPTING RECONNECTION…


CONNECTION RE-ESTABLISHED

E4281: …Hotel Zanzibar, requesting back-up! Repeat this is Sergeant Pierson of the 428th, requesting any UNSC squad in Old Mombasa. We’re pinned down by Covenant forces and need immediate back-up at the Hotel Zanzibar-

CONTACT LOST
ATTEMPTING RECONNECTION…


UNABLE TO CONNECT/SIGNAL MIA/KIA

i like it, MAKE MOAR NAOW!! lol but seriously its good just add moar firepower and teh awesomes will ensue.

That…

Was really good! First time I’ve ever seen a fanfic based on just the radio transmissions. And honestly, I think you executed it perfectly. More please!

Good job.

This is the kind of fanfic I like…not some 12 yr old writing about him being a Spartan(or an over the top just as badass Marine) and saving the day

Thanks everyone, I might try another of these Radio transmissions. I may also start posting ODST: Hellbound when I get it refined. For now, it’s linked in the Fan Fiction Archive, if you’re interested in checking it out as it is current.

> Thanks everyone, I might try another of these Radio transmissions. I may also start posting ODST: Hellbound when I get it refined. For now, it’s linked in the Fan Fiction Archive, if you’re interested in checking it out as it is current.

Nice work! You should post this in the fan fiction gallery thread I made a while ago. The goal is to organize all of the community’s fan fics in one spot on the site. More would be cool, but I really like the length of it as it is.
I am writing a fan fic, and it just keeps growing! It is way bigger than I had intended. I admire your ability to stick to your plans.

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that…was…so…cool.