Working on my frist map , looking for feedback

[classyfennekin]

https://www.halowaypoint.com/en-us/games/halo-5-guardians/xbox-one/map-variants?lastModifiedFilter=Everything&sortOrder=BookmarkCount&page=1&gamertag=classyfennekin#ugc_halo-5-guardians_xbox-one_mapvariant_classyfennekin_f6316a82-d9b4-4d08-a983-b2ccb3741dcd

Been working on this, wanted to share what I got so far, I would like feedback, so I can make it better

[Noroi8268]

Well I will give it a look at and I’ll come back to give you my feedback. Wow that rhymes Lol