http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=as_-2OmrtF4
This is my first Halo 4 Montage, I know the editing isn’t amazing but I think it turned out nice for my first montage. Also not sure what happened at the end with the credits, there was meant to be a clip playing from beginning to end but for some reason only part of it played the clip. If you enjoyed it please like, comment and subscribe! And also some constructive criticism would be nice 
Those sniper shots were really nice, if there wasn’t that much DMR in it i would have liked it more
I’ll give you an 8 out of 10
Let’s just say, that I’ve seen better editing. But, I have seen much, much worst editing.
There are some nice video effects included in the piece, so you are getting the hang of things. Just keep on experimenting.
I like it, the only thing I found odd was the pulses you did when firing the DMR.
Other than that nice first montage and keep up the good work.