We need some feedback on some changes

Made some changes on one of our most popular machinimas on our channel.

This is episode 3, so if you’re wondering what you missed I could link episode 1 and 2, it would also be good to watch at least one of the older ones to fully grasp the changes, I’ve made.

Please give me feedback, we are close to getting partnered soon so learning what our audience likes or how to get a wider audience would be nice.

Episode 1:

Episode 2:

Episode 3:

Also we’re recruiting body actors, so please feel free to message me or MiSs ToX1c.
(Original creator is MiSs ToX1c so message her on Xbox if you want further details)