Teaser Trailer For My New Machinima!

“As Humanity’s time on Reach grows close to a break in new advances to aid civilisation, a new darkness lurks over their shoulder, preparing for the blackend evil to consume the beacon of light for all eternity. As Reach begins to fall against the threat of the covenant onslaught, three soldiers discover something even larger than then their enemies, allies and themselves. These three are the marks Reach will leave on history. They’re Reach’s Legacy. But as a new race rises, an old one must fall…”

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I was not impressed by the voice acting by any means, though I understand how hard it can be to come by people with a voice that can make these things sound proper. Even so, it was impossible to take seriously.

I also didn’t really get a feel of what was to come from the machinima later on, it seemed to reveal absolutely nothing. It wasn’t very exciting.

Sorry.

Well, it was supposed to be a little cryptic. I picked that poem for a specific reason as it has a lot to do with the character and his story. You just have to listen to the lines and inspect to get insight on the character. Also, I was a little worried about the whole not saying too much about the overall story, so I asked another machinimator about it as he does a lot of machinima has a decent following. He told me that it was alright as it was only a teaser and not a trailer. What I wanted people to get from it was a sense of mystery as the mood given off is, in my opinion, very mysterious. I like the idea of making people think about what they’re watching instead of just straight out telling them. I made it the way it is to reflect the feel of the actual story.