So my buddy helped me fix this up and now it looks better than the original one, just trying to get feedback on it and what people might like for the next made intro.
Thoughts?
AWESOME! Just like the ODST pod intro 
Make a Breakout-style intro where your Spartan runs then jumps out of the pelican! Are you up for the challenge, cuz I don’t know about this whole script thing; it is really cool to see what people use it for though.
Wow that was cool!
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> AWESOME! Just like the ODST pod intro
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> Make a Breakout-style intro where your Spartan runs then jumps out of the pelican! Are you up for the challenge, cuz I don’t know about this whole script thing; it is really cool to see what people use it for though.
Challenge accepted!