So i’ve been working on a game called “template” im the lead designer/main writer
working with another who does all the codeing and programming, i would enjoy your opinions on the first 2 minutes of the game.And yes it will also be released on pc thanks in advance i look foward to your CONSTRUCTIVE comments and advice!
Couple things, capitalize things like “i”, “i’d”, and “robert” (though I’m assuming you can personally name the character, so that could have been your own choice), kinda bothers me (example, also on Jack’s line right after robert’s, it says “rember” instead of “remember”). I think it would be better if you got Jack to tell you about the building when you enter, not when you leave (example). I would prefer to see text prompts like when you’re talking with someone, not flying up from the bottom to the top of the screen (example)
Just a few things I noticed
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Thanks!
I will fix all spelling errors and grammar when the game story is written is one of the final phases.