Need some feedback on to make a better show!

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Hello everyone I’m a content Creator and this is 2nd stab at making a Halo machinima. This is EP 1 of 4 coming. I have already filmed everything but sometimes things need reshoots.

Here it is
Halo WarGames S2 E1

Let me know what you folks think.

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I like it, it’s pretty charming and engaging for the most part. Really the only thing I have to say is on technical stuff, like some of the dialogue being too quiet or maybe shooting when it’s brighter so you get less noise from the camera.

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Thank you, much appreciated