I don’t think this even deserves constructive criticism.
I imagine the main thing bringing people back to a single “Lets Play” channel are personalities of the players rather than the game, something this deeply lacks.
At times you can barely hear the other players, not to mention some of them are little kids which I would want to just mute anyway.
While it’s good to see Halo 4 customs alive, I would never want to watch through 23:19 of this nothingness, let alone subscribe to your channel.
It would help to be a little more talkative to keep your audience entertained. Also used and introduction in game welcoming your viewers. One of the best forms of comedy i have seen in lets plays in were the players make a funny story based off the coincidences in there game, Like the ones games grumps and 2 best friends to that leads to animated flashes of them. In your description you said your talking players to be in next video. That’s very generous and Maybe i can come in and help out a little.
I’ll be honest, I’m not a great fan of gameplay videos or commentaries. I think the only person I’ve ever watched is Wangtim3. So this was kind of a miss for me.
As for the criticism, the last two posts explain the issues pretty well. :I
> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qy5ZOLs1AsE
Oh, also i forgot. Another big problem is that you are playing literally the most boring game types in Halo. You need to play more games that promote sociability, stuff like teacher.