My youtube video

Hello everyone, i started doing a campaign playthrough on youtube and i will eventually get to actual matches and what not but i was wondering if people could go look at my video and give me some criticism on my videos and just tell me if im doing anything that i shouldnt be doing. i recently moved and now i can finally start uploading at regular intervals so ive already fixed that problem. but if you could go watch it and just give me some feedback that would be wonderful, if not thats fine and i hope you enjoy your day and play tons of halo 5 - YouTube