My Halo 4 Commentary

Hello guys i am just getting back into halo after a long 6 months break from the game. This is my first match playing it and also my first ever commentary since i figured i need to get over my speech issues.

The link to it is here
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4T-jMorcxWo

I have recieved some constructive criticism already on how to make my commentary better but it would not hurt to here a couple of other opinions too.
I hope to here for anyone who is willing to lend an ear and i will be posting more halo content daily. Thanks for your time.

Nice video i left a like if you produce some more halo vids i’ll give the sub.

Thanks man i am going to have alot more halo 4 gameplays coming.