This is my first I threw it together really quick so I hope you like it. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7kio1RHbNz8 p.s I am new to this site so I don’t know how to post links if this does not work but copy and paste it thanks.
Friendly advice/critique: WAAAAAY too many sniper kills. Montages that show mostly sniper kills became old during H2 already.
anyone else?
Want me to be brutally honest? It sucks. But its your first time 
Good luck!
I have to agree, the Sniping took up way too much of the video. Snipers doesn’t really do it for anyone these days unless they have a large audience already.
The music choice was…interesting. In future you should try to time it up with the shots, it makes it look cooler. As for Editing you should use more than one transition for each clip and maybe do a theater clip or two of the other players getting killed.
Other than that I’d give it a 2.7 out of 5.0
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I just have to give you a brutally honest opinion:
The music was generic, and bad. There were only two overkills which other was in SWAT and the other made with grenades. Then there was one sniper triple kill and the rest was double kills. That was like a summary of my normal day of Halo Reach: few double kills, and a triple kill. Not very impressive.
I tell you, no one gets the first montage right the first time. But if you are going to make one, get actual multikills. In the world of montages double kills don’t even count unless they are extremely well done. Triple kills should only be a last resort to fill gaps in the montage.
All in all, a montage consisting purely of double kills isn’t impressive at all. But don’t be upset, not all people get enough multikills to be able to make montages, I know I don’t. That’s exactly why I haven’t even considered making one, lack of content.