Multi Halo Montage

I just made a halo montage. The clips are poop and its my first time editing. Just looking for some feedback and help on getting clips and my editing.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E7qM3lKWa4g

Feedback:

  • It’s easier if you create a hyperlink: RocketTage Episode 1 II Multi-Halo Minitage - I’m not sure what type of device you used for recording but the video quality was very poor. - The music needs more tempo. - It looks like just you get random kills and record, it does not lead up to anything, the kills are off beat. Hurts my head to watch. - The graphic text editing was horrible use a more favorable font. - What was your goal here to show with Halo?Pros:

  • You did keep it under the 5minute mark. - You uploaded the video to YouTube.Keep it simple.

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