Midship remake

Community General Discussion
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Hey everybody I’ve been working on a midship remake and finally finished it.
The name of the map= Cruiser
Author=JollyRoger18
Map built on= Forge Island.

Please let me know what you think. I made it as purple as i could with the objects and tried to make it as close as possible. Thanks

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> Hey everybody I’ve been working on a midship remake and finally finished it.
> The name of the map= Cruiser
> Author=JollyRoger18
> Map built on= Forge Island.
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> Please let me know what you think. I made it as purple as i could with the objects and tried to make it as close as possible. Thanks

This may be better served in community creations. Also, could you provide a link so we may see for ourselves?

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im sorry im new to halo waypoint. A link to my forge map? im not sure how to do that

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i thought giving the name and my gamertag name was enough to download and see

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> im sorry im new to halo waypoint. A link to my forge map? im not sure how to do that

Go onto your Fileshare from Career at the top, Map Variants, find it, click on it, it’ll be brought up, just copy and paste the link

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Here’s the link: Cruiser

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> Here’s the link: Cruiser

Thanks. I’ll take a look at it.

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I mean… I hate to burst your bubble, but that’s what Onyx and Simplex basically do…

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> I mean… I hate to burst your bubble, but that’s what Onyx and Simplex basically do…

The guy is trying to be creative, give him a break.

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thank you Noble138, did you like the map or should i post screen shots on here too?

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> thank you Noble138, did you like the map or should i post screen shots on here too?

I like it

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Thanks so does that mean you have run around it? i added the little ledges so you can jump in the front and tried to add a little roundness to it like the original

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> thank you Noble138, did you like the map or should i post screen shots on here too?

You probably should, as I may not get onto my xbox tonight.

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here are some screenshots, just click the link and go to screenshots

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https://www.halowaypoint.com/en-us/players/jollyroger18/halo4/fileshare#!/?section=Image&SearchDate=7&SortBy=2&view-select=Tile&startIndex=0

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I’ve downloaded it and will give a quick run through if you want.

Would it be alright if I come back with some suggestions for alterations if I think any ought ot be made? I mean that in the nicest way possible by the way. No intention to slight you.

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not a problem at all, thats what i want people to do. any ways that make it better im down for, when you do change something , list what you changed

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will you be posting your feedback on my thread or your community feedback page you lsted?

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I’ll list it here.

Anyway, I did have a few problems with the map. As far as midship remakes go, it’s probably the best one I’ve seen as of yet.

I’ll just put a bulleted list of possible changes:

[/li]- Expand the bases a bit (They seemed a bit small for a midship remake)

  • Utilise Brace Larges (you may need to delete or replace a few Decorative blocks to free up more of these) for the outer walls (they have a better texture.)

  • There are a few jumps missing on the map, specifically up by the enclosed power position (the one in the center with a lot of cover) that are pretty mandatory for that area to function properly.

  • The perviously mentioned position could use a bit more cover if possible.

What I’d recommend doing is using that same pallet, try to make the map a little less “Spaceship”-esque. Instead, give it a more rockey, natural feeling. A remake doesn’t necessarily have to take on the exact attributes, and using Forge Islands rocks would benefit a lot in certain areas.

The walls used near the one power position I mentioned (near the middle area, blocking the ramp to the base from the middle) could be replaced with an Artifact Base (on either side) that would both look aesthetically better and be a bit more similar to the initial design of the map.

All in all though, very good effort. It’s a lot more accurate than the ones I’ve seen in the past.

Also keep in mind the above comments are purely suggestions and you are totally free to do what you want with the map.

Sorry if anything comes off as overly harsh or assertive, I really don’t mean to :slight_smile:

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Thank ou for the feedback, im going to get on tonight and fix somethings, i already fixed the covered base ramps where you can now jump up from the side walkways like before, i will email again when iv finished,

I would like for your help again looking at it when im finished again if you can.