So guys, I posted earlier about what to expect for Halo 5 machin
ima, well on Halo 4 I’m producing a really unique Idea for a machinima. I’ve actually starting to gain popularity with it. I mainly got good at typing this story out because of my own experiences. I have a question about it though, if I was to bring it to Halo 5, do you think it will be a hit or should I remain in Halo 4? What do you think?
Name of machinima: Mind of The Insane (MOTI)
Episodes available:
1.)
2.)
I’d also like if you enjoyed my machinima, to give me your feedback on youtube! I’d very much apperciate that.
Oh and to MOD’s of Halowaypoint. Not sure where was best to post this, so if in wrong area, would you be kind to move it to appropriate forums, thanks!
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> Oh and to MOD’s of Halowaypoint. Not sure where was best to post this, so if in wrong area, would you be kind to move it to appropriate forums, thanks!
Don’t worry you posted in the right place. Also I’m going to watch what you have here cause it sounds interesting.
Im sorry but you need to significantly improve your skills as a machinima maker cause that was just awful.
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> Im sorry but you need to significantly improve your skills as a machinima maker cause that was just awful.
ah it’s cool, I respect your opinion, I am trying to get better from where i am now, I’ve actually got better skill with full animations but Machinima is different than that. Most people think it’s good though. Your my first negitive feedback. Got anypointers I could have changed>
or was it jsut the story you didn’t like?
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> > Im sorry but you need to significantly improve your skills as a machinima maker cause that was just awful.
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> ah it’s cool, I respect your opinion, I am trying to get better from where i am now, I’ve actually got better skill with full animations but Machinima is different than that. Most people think it’s good though. Your my first negitive feedback. Got anypointers I could have changed>
> or was it jsut the story you didn’t like?
The story is interesting ill give you that but everything else is a mess:
- Poor and lazy editing.
- Lackluster voicing. The only good voices are the Russian girl and the spanish guy but everyone else is either breathing into their mice or giving no passion to their roles.
- Constant background noise from the voices as well as in game stuff that shouldn’t be heard like the announcer.
- Why did some one have armor effects in the reach bit? That is a sign of sloppy body acting.
- I don’t see how I am the only one cause there should be way more people pointing out the many faults in your series. Either your subs are lying to you to make you feel good or something else.
- Although the premise is good it needs more expansion.
- Effects and CGI are also good but don’t let them be the main focus of the series. Its not the effects that makes a machinima.Take my criticism seriously cause you seriously need to step up your game. I learned from the best and perhaps its time you watch a few machinimas yourself and understand what you must do.
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> > > Im sorry but you need to significantly improve your skills as a machinima maker cause that was just awful.
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> > ah it’s cool, I respect your opinion, I am trying to get better from where i am now, I’ve actually got better skill with full animations but Machinima is different than that. Most people think it’s good though. Your my first negitive feedback. Got anypointers I could have changed>
> > or was it jsut the story you didn’t like?
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> The story is interesting ill give you that but everything else is a mess:
>
> - Poor and lazy editing.
> - Lackluster voicing. The only good voices are the Russian girl and the spanish guy but everyone else is either breathing into their mice or giving no passion to their roles.
> - Constant background noise from the voices as well as in game stuff that shouldn’t be heard like the announcer.
> - Why did some one have armor effects in the reach bit? That is a sign of sloppy body acting.
> - I don’t see how I am the only one cause there should be way more people pointing out the many faults in your series. Either your subs are lying to you to make you feel good or something else.
> - Although the premise is good it needs more expansion.
> - Effects and CGI are also good but don’t let them be the main focus of the series. Its not the effects that makes a machinima.
> Take my criticism seriously cause you seriously need to step up your game. I learned from the best and perhaps its time you watch a few machinimas yourself and understand what you must do.
well it’s good to know that my voicing in it is good, the one you called a spanish guy was me. 
I thought I was doing horrible, but you thought it was spanish which is wasnt
It’s itallian actually
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> > > Im sorry but you need to significantly improve your skills as a machinima maker cause that was just awful.
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> > ah it’s cool, I respect your opinion, I am trying to get better from where i am now, I’ve actually got better skill with full animations but Machinima is different than that. Most people think it’s good though. Your my first negitive feedback. Got anypointers I could have changed>
> > or was it jsut the story you didn’t like?
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>
> The story is interesting ill give you that but everything else is a mess:
>
> - Poor and lazy editing.
> - Lackluster voicing. The only good voices are the Russian girl and the spanish guy but everyone else is either breathing into their mice or giving no passion to their roles.
> - Constant background noise from the voices as well as in game stuff that shouldn’t be heard like the announcer.
> - Why did some one have armor effects in the reach bit? That is a sign of sloppy body acting.
> - I don’t see how I am the only one cause there should be way more people pointing out the many faults in your series. Either your subs are lying to you to make you feel good or something else.
> - Although the premise is good it needs more expansion.
> - Effects and CGI are also good but don’t let them be the main focus of the series. Its not the effects that makes a machinima.
> Take my criticism seriously cause you seriously need to step up your game. I learned from the best and perhaps its time you watch a few machinimas yourself and understand what you must do.
ny ya I know about some of it. I actually rushed a bit because I was way behind my schedule. I do know i can do better cuase I have better machinima’s it just when I go that good it takes me forever cuase I dont have ateam like more machinima’s