Lending a Hand (Machinima Critique)

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Warm greetings and salutations, everyone!
I wish to enlist the help of Halo Waypoint users to view, and critique a Halo 3 Machinima I created for my YouTube channel. My motivations are as follows: I wish to 1.) contribute to the waning Halo machinima community; 2.) receive feedback to improve the quality of content for future videos; 3.) acquire some notoriety as a competent Halo content producer.

While this type of address may be discouraged, I’m unfamiliar to the ways of advertising; aside from posting in the comments’ section of established Halo YouTube channels for subscriber flow. What I’m asking of the community is to take a risk: a chance on me. This is a type of “investment” I will not treat irresponsibly; for if I am given the time to prove my worth, I will stupefy and certainly impress my audience.

But to conclude, if you wish to assist my endeavor, here is the YouTube link: "One Final Effort" - Halo 3 Music Video [Halo: MCC] - YouTube
Thank you in advance for taking the time to read this thread. It truly is appreciated!
-Isaac

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While I’m most definitely fresh off the pasture, I am willing to learn from mistakes, and accept wise counsel. :smiley:

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That was better than I expected! Good work!

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I apologize for not providing that convenience. I did not see that “copy a link” option during my initial post. I know the feature now for future threads. Thank you! :smiley:

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> That was better than I expected! Good work!

Thank you very much, Whalers! I am aware most initial machinima producers are rather “novice” to the fundamental rules of making machinimas. But thanks to the helpful tutorials of Jon Grahm, and Digital Virus, I was able to a produce a video that is worthy of commendation. Though, in post-publishing, at certain scenes, I realize that I discard the “rule of 2/3rds…” (But that will remain our little secret, okay?) :wink: