When a character I like dies suddenly, it needs to be believable. This one wasn’t. As we all know, a Needler Rifle can’t one-shot someone with shields. The characters made no mention of their shields being down and they weren’t shown to be down. In-game, when a Spartans shields are down, they have that crackling effect. In the cutscene, this wasn’t the case.
Furthermore, when a Needler Rifle does headshot someone who’s shields are down, the Needle round doesn’t pass clean through. It sticks in and then explodes a few seconds latter. That didn’t happen. I mean, even if you head-canon some reason as to why her shields were down, you still have to try and explain this.
The problem is, it feels like they gave no thought to this. After hearing the commentary, I have an idea of what happen. They were originally going to have her die on the Scarab mission, but due to time constraints they had to cut it. So they had to make up her death in short notice, and this is what we were stuck with.
If I could change that scene, I would have:
1: Shown their shields break and crackling as if hit by a Plasma Pistol Overcharge.
2: Had the characters mention the beam frying their shields. Something along the lines of
Jun: Damn, my shields are all scrambled, anyone elses working?
Emile: Mine are toast too. I guess that’s what a big–Yoink- laser beam will do.
Carter: Focus Noble team.
3: When she gets shot, she would’ve stumbled, gasped a few times, and then we’d hear the Needle explode. She’d fall down face first, and we’d see a Half-Dollar sized hole in the back of her head.
PS: I don’t think this is a spoiler to anyone anymore. The games been out for nearly 2 years now. So if you still haven’t played through the campaign and are surfing the forums, then chances are you were never going to play it anyways.