I decided to a wrote up of a pretty late overview/review of Halo 5. I enjoy writing but aren’t too comfortable with sharing my work and I’m not too fond of what I’ve done but I guess you’ll never improve without trying so here it is:
https://thebluesenseireviews.wordpress.com
If I could get any feedback that’d be great.
You’ve made a few spelling/grammar mistakes, but overall not bad. I love how you worded this, in particular:
> The REQ system is 343i way of allowing players to have access to free DLC, this is done by offering players micro transactions in the form of REQ packs (these can also be purchased from REQ points that are earned in game)
Like you’re supposed to buy it with money, oh you can buy it with req points too, by the way.
Outside of some spelling and grammar mistakes I found it to be rather enjoyable to read.
Thanks for the feedback, it’s been a while since I’ve done any writing at all and I’m glad you enjoyed it. You two definitely boosted my confidence a bit and I’m thankful for that.
I can’t read the whole thing since my class is about to start, but I’d say the review is pretty spot on. Like the others have said, only some minor spelling / grammatical errors are there. One error I saw alot was using a comma when a period may have been more suitable. I would elaborate, but class is about to start, like I said. All in all, I’d say keep up the great work!
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> I can’t read the whole thing since my class is about to start, but I’d say the review is pretty spot on. Like the others have said, only some minor spelling / grammatical errors are there. One error I saw alot was using a comma when a period may have been more suitable. I would elaborate, but class is about to start, like I said. All in all, I’d say keep up the great work!
Yeah I see what you mean, thank you for the feedback and I will definitely improve on my grammar and spelling for that matter. As for the whole feedback so far, I’d say I’ve rather well and I kinda expected the grammar being issue as I was never taught punctuation in school but I did still manage to get a B in English so it couldn’t be all that bad.
Thank you very much!
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> > I can’t read the whole thing since my class is about to start, but I’d say the review is pretty spot on. Like the others have said, only some minor spelling / grammatical errors are there. One error I saw alot was using a comma when a period may have been more suitable. I would elaborate, but class is about to start, like I said. All in all, I’d say keep up the great work!
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> Yeah I see what you mean, thank you for the feedback and I will definitely improve on my grammar and spelling for that matter. As for the whole feedback so far, I’d say I’ve rather well and I kinda expected the grammar being issue as I was never taught punctuation in school but I did still manage to get a B in English so it couldn’t be all that bad.
> Thank you very much!
I’ve always wanted to get into writing, but never really had any inspiration. I’m pretty good at spelling / grammar / punctuation, so ask me if you need any help with those subjects. …or you could just google it, if you want.
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> > > I can’t read the whole thing since my class is about to start, but I’d say the review is pretty spot on. Like the others have said, only some minor spelling / grammatical errors are there. One error I saw alot was using a comma when a period may have been more suitable. I would elaborate, but class is about to start, like I said. All in all, I’d say keep up the great work!
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> > Yeah I see what you mean, thank you for the feedback and I will definitely improve on my grammar and spelling for that matter. As for the whole feedback so far, I’d say I’ve rather well and I kinda expected the grammar being issue as I was never taught punctuation in school but I did still manage to get a B in English so it couldn’t be all that bad.
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> I’ve always wanted to get into writing, but never really had any inspiration. I’m pretty good at spelling / grammar / punctuation, so ask me if you need any help with those subjects. …or you could just google it, if you want.
I’ll definitely keep that in mind, thanks. I’m just really doing it for fun at the moment. I like writing but I never felt confident enough to have my voice heard.