How would you like to see John end?

As I was hanging out in the IP Skype room just chatting about Halo and such, I suddenly started to daydream and instantly began vomiting this into the chat. In my mind’s eye, it was the only way I could picture Master Chief going down… or is he? The Halo Universe has been an amazing source of inspiration to my creativity. It provides both something familiar and something totally alien, while the whole time sitting you right there in the pilot’s chair.

That brings me to my prompt for this thread: How would you like to see the Chief’s story end? How would you like it left open or have closure? By no means do you have to have the length of my brain vomit! A mere concept or two-bits of your mind would suffice! Take this opportunity to fabricate your own ideal ending!

> John, wearing shreds of armor and undersuit limps forward, holding the gnarled stub that used to be his right arm. Hanging from a chain in his left hand dangles a battered, empty holo-chip. Face shrouded in hard shadows, teeth clinched, still the Spartan limps forward. Before him a brilliant light show throws light in strange ways. It’s almost as if some parts were a black hole and some were supernova. John’s skin smokes as the beads of sweat dotting exposed flesh sizzle away. Mere feet from the anomaly, he stops. His body seems to ripple as space is distorted. John raises his face. It is difficult to do as he seems to have to fight time. After a full five seconds of gaining and losing ground, he manages to gaze upon the slipspace-suspended AI core.
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> "Medicant Bias…"
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> The Spartan struggles to speak. A trickle of blood drains from the corner of his mouth. Now that his face is exposed, you see a ragged cut starting from his left temple and swooping across his right eye down to his strong jaw.
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> His hair shoes that at one point it had been close shaven, but now it is matted to his scalp, stubble bristling about his jaw.
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> "No…"
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> The Spartan releases his amputated right arm. A makeshift tourniquet prevents the wound from draining life onto the cold, dead floor.
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> He then holds his clenched fist up so that the battered holo-chip dangles mere inches before his pained face. A wave of emotions wash over him. His teeth bare as the muscles in his face struggle to control the wave of emotions.
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> These things bring back memories of a time long ago.
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> A woman pats his back and kisses his forehead.
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> A man carries him on his shoulders, laughing gayly.
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> The weight of the world presses down on the Spartan’s shoulders. The world grows dizzy and he collapses to his knees
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> The chip sways gently back and forth.
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> A woman tells him that he is the only hope for mankind.
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> Empty caskets disappear into space.
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> Cortana places her hand on his chest.
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> "You are not Mendicant Bias."
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> The lights dance quicker.
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> The entire room seems to come alive as the very walls and floor start shifting.
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> Time and space are tearing themselves apart as the AI core attempts to flee this dimension.
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> "Cortana…"
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> John thrusts his remaining fist into the orb as he stands in one difficult, sudden movement.
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> "You will not be remembered like this!"
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> Tears stream down the broken man’s cheek from his only good eye. Sobbing uncontrollably, he pushes his fist deeper into the depth Cortana’s essence. Deeper into Cortana’s soul.
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> "YOU ARE NOT THE MACHINE!"
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> The world explodes into white around him.
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> For the first time in his life, he doesn’t feel pain.
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> He doesn’t feel loss.
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> For the first time in his life…
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> John feels human.

… Is it okay if that wall of text made my heart race in excitement?

I’d like to see him go slowly, but naturally. Not to sound like a torcherer, but I want him to die in a way where he can reflect upon what he’s done in his life and come to that conclusion that he is human on his own rather than people saying he is or isn’t. If you think about it, that’s all it’s really been throughout the games and books; people referring Chief and other spartans as human or machine, but we’ve never seen Chief actually reflect upon the matter out loud. At least not in detail. Seeing Chief in his final minutes come to the conclusion that he truly is human would make a great ending for Master Chief, imo, if he were to die.

But OP, that draft script is really powerful and would be the kind of emotion generator I’d want Chief’s possible death to be written like.

HALO ?
-Green and Blue plays-
Chief is in The Ark’s control room once again, limping, crawling, battered, and alone. His Chestpice is torn off, his left armour pieces gone, and his helmet is nearly destroyed and covered in blood.
As John crawls toward the index, he hears flashbacks of his friends and enemies…

The Didact
“The Mantle of Responsibility is the Forerunners’ and the Forerunners’ alone”

Guilty Spark
“Protocol must be followed, we must activate the ring”

Halsey
“You are our…our only hope”

Arbiter
“Remember me, when you tread on the Great Journey…”

Johnson
“Send me out…with a bang”

John collapses and seemingly gives up lying facedown.
“The flood, have almost won-trembles as blood spits onto his helmet-
Humanity is…is on the brink. We have truly lost…”

Cortana
“Promise me, when this is all over, that you know which one of us is the machine!”

-Suddenly the pieces of Cortana on the Ark from Halo 3 had appeared, forming one last time into a physical figure.-

“Not yet, John, not yet…
You have grown, and you have evolved. Let us do this, for humanity, one LAST TIME!”

-Cortana lifts MC up with her physical/hardlight form.

Together, they reach onto the index and she joins the armour again, lifting John’s right armour piece.

“Halo, it over”-Cortana
“No. It is just, it is just getting started” -MC

-Then they both activate the Index-

Now, the Halos activate and now the player is surrounded by white.

Precursor
" You, human, have obtained the mantle for your kind, you have now destroyed the Flood, and the Forerunners have been destroyed. Take my gratitude kindly and go back to Earth.
You have yet. however one task, Precursor moves to the side and shows Cortana walking towards John.
You must become truly, HUMAN."

Cortana
“It is, it is finally over, John. I would never had thought that we, would be together, once again.
Come, I will take you home.”

-Cortana reaches for Chief’s hand-

John takes off his helmet and grins for once in a long time.

“I know what it is like, to feel human, thank you-falls down into Cortana’s arms-”

Precursor then opens a portal
“Welcome to your ascendency, Reclaimer…”

Cortana then changes from her blue sprite, into a human Halsey. She then carries him instead for the 1st time.
“Welcome home John!”

-Flash to Credits with the Halo Theme!-

This is my dream of what will happen!

Arbiter: wot wot wot
Diadact: Grrr I h8 all u humans grr i will compost u all
Cheif: no stop it u dik
Didact: ok

ROLL CREDITS

> Derpiter: wort wort wort
> Derdect: Grrr I h8 all u humans grr i will compost u all
> MR.Cheif: no stop it u jerk
> Derdect: ok
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> ROLL CREDITS

Fixed it for ya!

> … Is it okay if that wall of text made my heart race in excitement?

It’s completely understandable :wink:

My mind was racing as I was thinking it out and simultaneously writing it down. It was powerful, even to me.

Good stories, guys! Pixel… I don’t even…

> > … Is it okay if that wall of text made my heart race in excitement?
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> It’s completely understandable :wink:
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> My mind was racing as I was thinking it out and simultaneously writing it down. It was powerful, even to me.
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> Good stories, guys! <mark>Pixel… I don’t even</mark>…

It was the best one! It was poetry in motion!

I have a hunch that 343-Guilty Spark/Chakas will make an appearance within the next game or two… Perhaps in his… altered state… we will get a much better glimpse at the old him??

> I have a hunch that 343-Guilty Spark/Chakas will make an appearance within the next game or two… Perhaps in his… altered state… we will get a much better glimpse at the old him??

He deleted the Chakas part of him when he was composed/turned into an AI, I believe. So I don’t think we’ll be seeing Chakas return. However, I am very interested to see how Guilty Spark is in his current state and also some visual backstory adding to how he survived the Lesser Ark’s destruction/heavy damage.

Unless I missed that paragraph, I don’t think he did. He is one and the same, he just became more analytical when he was transferred from a biological housing to a mechanical one. That, and a little fragmented. Not to mention he has a thousand or more other consciousnesses (holy crap that’s a big word! I do gud?) living inside of him!

Since Halo CE I always wanted Halo to end with Chief firing the Halo Array.

End with the Biggest Flash of light ever seen.

Starting it all over.

> Unless I missed that paragraph, I don’t think he did. He is one and the same, he just became more analytical when he was transferred from a biological housing to a mechanical one. That, and a little fragmented. Not to mention he has a thousand or more other consciousnesses (holy crap that’s a big word! I do gud?) living inside of him!

You’re right. I went back and read the chapter segments again. He just suppressed his memories as Chakas because they didn’t offer him much help as a monitor and also his last memories were painful because of the trauma he underwent during MB’s assault on the capitol.