Hey all! I’m currently working on the second episode of my Halo 3 MCC machinima, “2, 4, 1, 10”, and I was wondering if you guys could please look at part of my script, and make suggestions. I would especially like help from people familiar with the machinima “Red vs Blue” as I make multiple references in the series
Sigma: Female ONI agent
Epsilon: Male ONI agent
Sigma and Epsilon are walking through Valhalla. They are approached by a red soldier, who says “Halt, blues!”
Sigma: Oh lord, not these guys…
Red: There is blue on your armor! Our purpose is to kill the blues! You are under arrest!
Epsilon: What is this guy’s problem?
Sigma: They’re simulation troopers from Project freelancer. Worst case scenario, we just kill them all. They’re a bunch of incompetent idiots.
Epsilon: Just tell em we’re freelancers or something.
Sigma turns towards the red.
Sigma: We’re not blues! We’re freelancers! Command sent us!
Red: Freelancers? To aid our glorious conquest against the blueness plaguing this land? But your armor has blue…
Sigma:…
Epsilon: It’s to fool the blues!
Sigma: Nice save
Red: Alright, come to the base…
Gunshot rings out, and he dies.
Red: OW! THE BACK OF MY HEAD!
Behind him we see an insurrectionist
Sigma: What? What the heck is the insurrection doing here? Cover me!
Sigma begins to run after him
Epsilon: Damn it Sig!
He sighs, and starts shooting at the insurrectionists