Currently writing some back story for my Spartan and his journey in life! This also a three part series, so there more writing to be done.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10048149/1/Halo-Shadowfall
Any feedback/criticism is welcome!
edit: Part 2 will be publish around Monday!
That is some quality work there my friend. There are a few typos here and there but you nailed the scene and I can see a very good story ahead. PS. Third person is not easy to write but based on what I have read you handle it very well.
Thanks, been working on this for a while so I’m glad I got some work of it finished. Now back to fixing whatever typos google miss!
P.S. notice my char’s old name pop up now and again >_<
When I wrote The Winter I used Microsoft word. It catches everything you miss and makes life a lot easier. trust me, if you have it, use it!
Yeah, originally I was using open office, then it start not to correct my spelling errors for some reason then I switched to Google Docs. In any case, Word going to be use for final proofreading/grammar.