Hi all. I wrote a screenplay for what I hope will turn into a Source Filmmaker machinima (if I can find someone with actual skills to help me animate it), and I’d like some feedback. It’s basically an alternate Halo 5 with some new characters thrown into the mix (that I hope aren’t too mary sue-ish). So if anybody’s interested, feel free to take a look at it, give feedback, eviscerate it and tell me I’m a bad writer and should feel bad, whatever you want. I can’t make the link clickable so you’ve got to copy/paste it into your address bar (which I realize nobody’s probably gonna do).