Halo: Anniversary Commentary

What’s up everyone? I do hope I am putting this in the right thread. Since I started my new commentary channel, I have begun uploading our play through of Halo: Combat Evolved Anniversary. Any feed back from this community or personal suggestions, I would be more than happy to hear.

Channel

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5

I personally think I did a better job on the second mission, which is Part 3 forward but I understand that improving sometimes requires hearing criticisms. As a warning, I do cuss occasionally in my commentaries.

Reply, comment, subscribe, but most importantly, I want to know the opinions and additions I could use to get better. Thanks again, and enjoy!