Hey guys SpartanI99 here and today I made a video about Halo 5’s population decline but I also state a possible solution within the video, if you guys could watch it and give me some feedback that’d be much appreciated! 
The Population Decline In Halo 5: Guardians!
Thanks!
It’s an interesting idea. Your narration was a little tedious to follow as it was continuous and at the same pitch. I would try leaving pauses and putting more emphases on your key points you want to establish tonally with your speech. Good work on your channel intro animation! Keep it up!
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> It’s an interesting idea. Your narration was a little tedious to follow as it was continuous and at the same pitch. I would try leaving pauses and putting more emphases on your key points you want to establish tonally with your speech. Good work on your channel intro animation! Keep it up!
Yo Thanks For The Criticism Man, I’ll Definitely Do Better On My Future Commentaries!