Halo 5 tips and tricks video: Looking for feedback

Hey guys, I made a video, running over some FFA tips and stuff like that. The video is one of my FFA games, in which I recorded retroactive commentary talking about what I’m doing and why I’m doing it, and calling out what I’m doing wrong or right. Same for my opponents. The idea of the series is to analyse my own gameplay to improve it, while also pointing out things that might help other players improve.

I’m thinking of otherwise to do this, like breaking down the game into certain engagements and looking at what’s happening to affect the outcome. Or making videos focusing on one aspect of the game, such as strafing, grenade usage, map control, etc.

If you guys have any feedback, I’d like to hear it.

Thanks all.