Hey guys, I’ve been working on a Halo 5 machinima series recently and I uploaded the prologue today. I would extremely appreciate if you check it out. Keep in mind this is my first time doing something like this and I just want to see if people like it. Please give any feedback that you can 
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ckBdIJws7aA
Alright, so I watched your prologue, and I liked it. Honestly, there’s not a lot I can say due to the video being a prologue, but I think you’re headed in the right direction. However, if I were to drop one hint of feedback, it would have to do with how fast you talk. I definitely know how it feels when you’re reading a script and you just want to get through it, but just take it a little slower. When you talk, try to be the character, not just a guy reading a script (if you know what I mean). Besides that, well done. I look forward to seeing more of Gold Squad.
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> Alright, so I watched your prologue, and I liked it. Honestly, there’s not a lot I can say due to the video being a prologue, but I think you’re headed in the right direction. However, if I were to drop one hint of feedback, it would have to do with how fast you talk. I definitely know how it feels when you’re reading a script and you just want to get through it, but just take it a little slower. When you talk, try to be the character, not just a guy reading a script (if you know what I mean). Besides that, well done. I look forward to seeing more of Gold Squad.
Hey, thanks for your feedback, I really appreciate it. I already finished the voices for season 1 but I have been thinking about going back and redoing some lines. In future seasons, I will take your feedback into consideration and try to speak more clearly and slower. Thanks