Halo 4 Title Screen

I was on youtube and I saw some fan made title screen, it was totally awesome.
This is the link

Here> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cyDUxd6qfnE&feature=related <Here

What do you guys think?

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Links are only white after you’ve already seen them. They always appear in Orange first.

Not a fan of the water.

The startup is okay. I’m not a fan of the menu itself though, it seems to be too red and somewhat irritates my eyes. The text also feels too large and it seems to get in my face too much.

I prefer this one: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iY3T6B1qnAo which is made by the same author, but I still think the text is too large.

wow the water looks really good and i like the music for it. Good fan made title screen!

I don’t like the “Arrival” one as much. It’s too much chaos for a main menu and it’s not really relevant to Halo 4 seeing as though that’s all 343 Guilty Spark talking to the Pillar of Autumn.

> The startup is okay. I’m not a fan of the menu itself though, it seems to be too red and somewhat irritates my eyes. The text also feels too large and it seems to get in my face too much.
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> I prefer this one: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iY3T6B1qnAo which is made by the same author, but I still think the text is too large.

The second one is freaking sick and it was recently made, i think i might of seen the first one before but this second on is sick as heck!

if the second one didn’t have as much going on, and less guilty spark than it would be better

i like the water and the forerunner city, but the letters are too un-haloish. i really like race999999’s Halo menus he’s made alot of em. heres a couple: