Halo 4 Montage seeking feedback

Hey whats up everyone on waypoint? I made a montage recently and I have little experience so I’m looking for some feedback to improve my editing skills. I’m planning to do these montages on a weekly basis and this one was from a guy who was the first to request.

Halo montage

If anyone would like me to make them a montage simply leave post on this thread.
http://www.halotracker.com/Forums/ShowThread.aspx?ID=4680343&Page=1