Halo 3: Comic

Hey guys, just joined the community (waypoint comunity, been playing halo for a few years now).

I’d like to ask you to take a look at this comics I made, using Halo 3.

Heres the link:
http://octavius288.daportfolio.com/gallery/374219

I’ve made these a long time ago and currently I’m starting the 4th, and last, chapter.
Anyway, hope you like them and I’d like to know what you think :slight_smile:

Reading now…

Stopped half way through: I can’t read when it’s that small :S

Like it though.

U can zoom in and using full screen might help (F11). Anyway, I’m glad you’re liking it :slight_smile:

I think it needs an improvement on the page edit: balloons, text, and pictures.

But I really like the Sin City touch that makes only having the visors colored, but I would have used a darker atmosphere.

Now the good things; I really like the story but the above stuff would make me feel more into it. I hope you accept constructive criticism.

Don’t you dare stop doing this! You’re really good!

Thats really good, keep up the good work. :slight_smile:

Thanks! And yes, I do appreciate constructive criticism :slight_smile:

I’ll try to make the next chapter(s) even better :slight_smile:

It’s got potential. My one major gripe is that you forgot to colour things like visors in some panels.