as my first Machinima I was going for like what DigitalPheer did in It’s a wonderful live it’s a great Series,but I’m sure you’ve seen it Anyway this video is about one or 2 of the issues you encounter or come across on the map called First Hemorrhage.
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Give me all the criticism I need granted I did this in one whole day but still give me some Opinion 
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I think it was pretty good for your first Machinima. If there’s anything you could improve on, it’s the voice acting and camera work. The camera was a bit slow, it didn’t keep up with everything very well.
The voice acting also wasn’t the best. There was mumbling, and the characters really didn’t express themselves that much. I would recommend getting several voice actors/actresses, it just makes all of the characters sound unique.
Well there’s my criticism, and I hope you take this into consideration with your next project. Good luck!
well thanks,yeah my voice isn’t the best for machinimas I’m more of a camera guy and editor than a voice actor.
I have to say that not bad for your first machinima, I’v seen much worser ones. I think that you could train moving quicker with view angle & voice acting part: it isn’t that bad , I could say that more training & trying out different elements of your voice.
Good luck!
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> as my first Machinima I was going for like what DigitalPheer did in It’s a wonderful live it’s a great Series,but I’m sure you’ve seen it Anyway this video is about one or 2 of the issues you encounter or come across on the map called First Hemorrhage.
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> Give me all the criticism I need granted I did this in one whole day but still give me some Opinion
Song name nao! It’s mah favorite!
Song Name- Caravan Palace - Clash (Original Mix)