Fan Novel: Events concurrent to Halo 4

I’ve been really invested in the Lore recently, and honestly I’ve liked it so much I decided to write about it.

I’m writing a story for fun about an ONI operation involving Frederick-104 and a Spartan IV fireteam right before the events of Halo 4. I plan to have the Didact’s attack and the New Phoenix incident tie into everything.

I am very open to any constructive criticism, and I want to know stuff that interferes with the canon, or choices that don’t seem to make sense, or actions that are inconsistent with the personality of the characters.

I left comments available so please feel free to point out any mistakes or anything that doesn’t seem right!
Thanks guys

Chapter 1 is released, and I plan to release chapter by chapter as I finish each one!

I’ll give this a read.