Do you think I did a Good Job doing this?

I am curious because there are alot of dislikes, but the only comments I got were about Black Ops II

So to the community did I miss anything, am I wrong in my review?

Bump for someone with reviewing experience?

It sorta depends on who your audience is. For someone who already has the game, I gotta say that I was pretty bored while you went over most of the details. On the other hand, you also mention that certain things were lack-luster, but never mentioned why. That would be something worth going into detail about. Information wise, you did pretty well. The entertainment value was a factor for me though. I also think you could have gone into a little bit of detail on how the new additions change the experience.
This is all my opinion, and i am by no means an expert review reviewer.