Could I Get Some Feedback?

I have begun Lets Playing all Halo games, excluding Halo Wars, on a schedule to have them all posted to youtube (Combat Evolved Anniversary, Halo 2, Halo 3, Halo 3: ODST, Halo: Reach) before Halo 4 is released. Then, after about a month (to give others time to play it themselves), I’ll start LPing it too.

Anyways, I have five levels uploaded right now. Could I get some feedback on at least “The Pillar Of Autumn”, level 1 of Halo: Combat Evolved?

i hope this goes in this forum, I’m not sure how to classify a Lets Play.