Cortana pencil sketch

Well, what do you guys think for my first time every drawing Cortana?

Sketch

Um… I think you may have forgotten to add a link to it…

(edit your post and add the link! I will judge it constructively once that has happened!)

> Um… I think you may have forgotten to add a link to it…
>
> (edit your post and add the link! I will judge it constructively once that has happened!)

Sorry, I noticed it as soon as I posted but was to busy transferring the picture to deviant art!

Well, it look’s pretty good for one’s first time - but the shoulders are a tad bit out of proportion.

Otherwise, it’s a good start. Keep it up!

Not too bad, the nose looks a bit messed up though. Otherwise pretty good.

> Not too bad, the nose looks a bit messed up though. Otherwise pretty good.

The nose is a -Yoink–ton messed up.

> Well, it look’s pretty good for one’s first time - but the shoulders are a tad bit out of proportion.
>
> Otherwise, it’s a good start. Keep it up!

I really don’t care if you bash on it. Practice is practice, no feelings hurt by saying anything.

> > Well, it look’s pretty good for one’s first time - but the shoulders are a tad bit out of proportion.
> >
> > Otherwise, it’s a good start. Keep it up!
>
> I really don’t care if you bash on it. Practice is practice, no feelings hurt by saying anything.

Constructive Criticism =/= Bashing

> > > Well, it look’s pretty good for one’s first time - but the shoulders are a tad bit out of proportion.
> > >
> > > Otherwise, it’s a good start. Keep it up!
> >
> > I really don’t care if you bash on it. Practice is practice, no feelings hurt by saying anything.
>
> Constructive Criticism =/= Bashing

Not necessarily, no. But I don’t want to make you feel like you need to hold back anything either. I hate it when people sugar-coat things.

That’s fantastic for a first attempt. There are corrections to be made, no doubt, but you’re definitely off to a good start. Keep practicing!

I can’t say much that hasn’t already been posted, but good try! I can only say that the shoulders are slightly not proportionate and her nose needs some work, and I personally think the hair is slightly off.
I personally wouldn’t do any better, if not worse…