http://youtu.be/TWoahrxfnVM
Hiya id really appreciate if you watched it and gave feedback :3 and if you like Me & my Wifey playing halo and talking about random stuff show us some love and like,favorite,comment and subscribe Thanks for watching.
It was watchable and I think its quite nice for a couple to be making a Dual Commentary. Is the video something that I would like, favorite, comment and subscribe for?
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To put it bluntly, your dual-commentary was lacking. I won’t really comment on the Gameplay aspect of things because I play Halo because of the trivia and Community-created Chaos that it beholds.
The reasons it lacks are because not only does the title of the video seem inappropriate (It is relevant to the topic you two talk about but for someone trying to search for the video on YouTube’s Search Bar, its incredibly frustrating) but you two are talking about a subject that isn’t relevant to the purpose of a Commentary. A purpose of a Commentary is to either talk about something related to the game (Halo: Reach) or the match you were playing (Zealot). Instead you two are talking about the Job Market which I don’t think any average Halo Gamer wants to hear about. Granted its an important subject, it is irrelevant to those who want to play games without any Real Life hesistation.
Additional notes would be the microphone quality is lacking and it is quite static almost like something you would hear from an XBL Microphone. The fact that you also decreased the size of the RAW Footage so you could include the two screens as well as the Halo Commentary Logo. The Logo isn’t necessary. You could have introduced the logo as an introduction sequence and then used the other seconds of the footage and just shown the two screens of gameplay from you and your partner.
On average, it is watchable and I would consider it to be Casual Commentary, it isn’t entertaining for someone like me. I would rather wish to come to a better understanding on how other Halo players interpret the Game.
I will agree with the post above.
It was watchable and i watched the whole thing. Its not everyday that you see a husband and wife playing halo together and doing a commentary so it is origional.
Your channel has great potintial if you guys keep doing this sort of thing.
But you should try to invest in some better microphones if you want to keeep doing this because they did seem to be static like threw the video. I really dont care what you talk about in the videos I mean someone does a girl advise commentary while playing halo. But you should probably talk about something more gameing relevent if you want the channel to become big. (not saying you couldnt talk about stuff not related to games and become famous.)
I say keep doing this.
Thank you so much for your feedback ill make sure to make some adjustments next video i think next time we are going to be talking about Skyrim and other addicting games that create bad life style habits ill talk to the misses about the editing and the mircophone thing we will also change the title.Thanks for your comments you too 
I hope you stay tuned cause like all youtube video series its only gonna get better.