Can someone help revise/rewrite my thread?

It seems like people don’t really understand my Bungie & Community - How to Improve Reach Matchmaking. I need someone to rewrite my thread so its more understandable and has better writing. I am trying to encourage people to look at my solution and be able to create their own solutions on my topics(excluding the Halo CE & Halo 2 Topic). Is anyone willing to do it? Please repost the re-vamped thread on here or send me a pm.

No one wants to help me? ): I can see that people have viewed the thread…