> Not to be rude or anything, but if a subject has been beaten to death in a previous book, surely future novels shouldn’t be required to go in to as much detail. <mark>At least I think that’s what your getting at.</mark>
>
> For example, we know who the Arbiter is, we’ve played him in 2 games and know him and his story pretty well. So when Traviss introduces him in Glasslands, she doesn’t need to spend 5 pages talking about his back story.
That is not what I am referring to. It’s not that I expect a full run-down of the prior canon of each recurring object in a new book. I expect that when recurring objects do come up in a new book, that those objects are accurately depicted in accordance with that prior canon. That’s what I mean when I say there is a lack of sufficient detail being paid attention to.
I don’t want the novel to give a full chapter summary of Thel’s prior actions, but I do want to see the book written in light of those incidents. In other words, I want him written as the -Yoink!- who won in a staring contest with the Gravemind and who, along with John, is the only reason why there is any Sangheili still breathing, not some skulking coward with no prowess; militarily, politically or otherwise.
> I am currently rereading The Thursday War, and came across something specific.
> [Spoilers]
> When BB is getting ready to reintegrate his fragment, he mentions that Dr Halsey once wiped a part of Cortana’s memory with Cortana never realising something was missing.
>
> And I was like “Hey that’s a call back to First Strike”, and realising that she must have read the novel in order to know that.
By the author’s own admission they have not read First Strike, or any other piece of Halo source material.
> Also if you could please fill me in on the plot holes, that would be grand.
Well, I suppose we’ll start with ONI arming the Elite rebels. Who are they using as an intermediary to deliver these weapons? No one, but themselves. Whilst they undermine the Arbiter they decide to show off their pretty human faces to potential agents belonging to the Arbiter himself, or even any ultra-fanatical Human hating elements within Telcam’s faction that would seek to have Telcam overthrown for his treachery. I’m pretty sure that this is sloppy Black Ops work at best and not something ONI would do. Whilst I am sure that Telcam would say that he can vouch for his men, I find ONI even taking that chance to be kinda silly given what is at stake here.
So they are secretly betraying the Arbiter by arming someone who wants to destroy him, during a time when one of the Arbiter’s main and probably most challenging political goals is not only peace with Humanity, but common understanding, for both species to move past war and bitterness towards each other and perhaps to rebuild a new Covenant (If his statements in Halo 3 are anything to go by, as well as opening up the possibility for future cultural exchanges by welcoming Phillips to study their historical sites directly). In light of what the Arbiter thinks is possible and wishes to achieve publicly, does anyone else think that ONI has unknowingly given Telcam a weapon far more powerful than any of the weapons they gave to him through the fact that Telcam now has solid proof of Humanity being a bunch of treacherous -Yoinks!- who cannot be trusted? He can make the Arbiter look like a twit if he reveals this, and discredit him quite thoroughly. This would do far more damage to the Arbiter’s goals, faction and ideals than merely killing him ever would. Telcam has an ultimate trump card that he could (And probably should) reveal now. ONI is just lucky that Telcam and his inner circle are too stupid to realise that they could end the Arbiter without making him a martyr, by just speaking and showing off their weapons and secret meetings. I think that Telcam could avoid similar accusations by saying that he took the opportunity to demonstrate Thel’s foolishness and naivety about Humans by initially accepting ONI’s offer. And ONI blundered on in without taking this into consideration. No one even mentioned it at the briefing (Of course I wouldn’t expect Kilo-5 to; they’re all too stupid; hired for their sheep like attributes rather than their brains).
What next then. Most of the Sangheili are (Or through Thel will be) non-hostile but there are all those splinter factions out there, and then there are the Brute factions that formed the Loyalists. We’re talking about factions of a 3000 year old tier 2 space faring group of 7 civilizations here who regarded 500 ships lost with all hands as a minor inconvenience. Meanwhile the UNSC has what, exactly, to defend itself should one, or a few, decide to just remove humans from existence for being annoying little -Yoink-? They have the Arbiter to support them, with his presumably large military power (Conveniently absent when he most needed it, hurr) and most likely to get larger and stronger as time goes on and with co-operation from the UNSC. They have nothing else. Their only safeguard against hostile Covenant factions for the short term (which is probably going to be at least 30 years), and they are trying to destroy him. The Arbiter is not just a military power either, he is a force for change and the only way to get all those dissidents movements to die out peacefully and completely. So great job to ONI; they’ve helped to kill the Arbiter. Now what are they going to do about the Brutes if they come for humanity? Or the other potentially few hundred to thousands of Sangheili colonies if some of them (Like the Storm Covenant) should decide to kill us? Oh, what’s that, the Arbiter’s faction and military power is now being absorbed into Telcam’s faction because he blew their operation wide open to the public, and who has now declared war on humanity for being inherently deceitful, untrustworthy and demonstrably dangerous?
There are more, especially when you start taking into consideration prior canonical details which I have scarcely even begun to do here (Just scrutinizing the novel’s premise on its own merits), but I can’t be bothered typing anymore.
> Anyway, at the end of the day 343 are the ones with the final say in the products they produce. If they thought that the books were as terrible and canon-breaking as some of the community say they are, they wouldn’t have sent the book to print.
That is terribly naive and assumes that 343i are infallible. They are most certainly not.