heyy guys i am a new director/producer of this halo show i stared and i would like any feed back or good advise on how i can make it better any tips or anything thanks (: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cP25slZsRWE&list=LLAlmmrc9 O6Xd_eiAf0zn61w&feature=mh_lolz
Firstly. “Doggystyle productions”? Really? -________-
Second, get better at using the theater camera. You’re too fidgety and you need to make the shots closer to the players so it feels more cinematic. Watch Arby ‘n’ the Chief or Red vs Blue to get a feeling of what I’m talking about.
Third, don’t cuss a lot. No one will take you seriously if you repeat obscenities in each sentence you say. Also, I don’t know if you’re joking, but did you seriously forget the name of your own show in-video? I couldn’t tell… If that’s the case, make a script to help you out. People want to hear clean, fluid speech, not the stuff I just heard, no offense.
Fourth, I would try to find a better subject to strive for other than the “top fails”, since everyone does that already. You need to come up with something that makes your show stand out. Your show needs to have traits that make other people want to watch it. Here, it’s the same as the next…
Lastly, I want you to answer me these two questions:
How long did this take you?
How many attempts did this take before you uploaded it to YouTube?
Its good so far
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> Its good so far
In future please don’t revive extremely old topics, thanks.