An Idea For A Halo 5:ODST TITLE

THIS IS ALL STILL VERY MUCH A SKETCH BUT IF YOU READ IT AND LIKE IT SAY SOMETHING.
-CHAPTER ONE: HOT DROP
Several SOEV drop pods fall past the screen in quick succession.
VOICE OVER: MY NAME IS SERGEANT FIRST CLASS SAMANTHA EMERSON. I AM A MARINE SPECIALIST SOLDIER TRAINED ALONGSIDE OTHERS IN THE ART OF UNCONVENTIONAL WAREFARE, INCLUDING INFILTRATION, GUERRILLA AND RECONNAISSANCE.
‘Roadie’s’ drop pod comes into focus. The hatch has been blown open and she is hanging on for dear life. Supplies fly out the hatch as a Sanghelli Zealot strangles her as they crash towards the surface.
VOICE OVER: WE ARE REFFERED TO OFFICIAL AS OBIRTAL DROP SHOCK TROOPERS [ODST] BUT THAT DOESN’T STOP PEOPLE FROM CALLING US OTHER NAMES.
The Elite bangs Roadie’s head hard on the wall of the pod and she goes limp.
VOICE OVER: MY PERSONAL FAVOURITE IS WHAT THE JARHEADS LIKE TO CALL US – D-BOYS.
The Screen goes blank.
Aboard The REPROACHFUL ENIGMA [Several Days Earlier] [Crew Quarters]
A marine wakes the sergeant up referring to her by her call sign ‘Roadie’ and tells her that they are now in orbit. He reminds her that she said for him to wake her as soon as it happens. Several other soldiers in the room are getting ready for their next mission. A public address system announces that ODST’s are to meet at the special briefing room.
[THE BRIEFING TAKES PLACE AND ROADIE’S SQUAD ‘DAMAGE’ IS DEPLOYED ALONG SIDE SEVERAL OTHERS]
VOICE OVER: YOU CAN DROP INTO TWO SITUATIONS. THE FIRST IS WHEN THE ENEMY DOESN’T KNOW YOUR’E COMING. THEN IT’S A WALK IN THE PARK, YOU’LL HAVE THE BEST ADVANTAGE – SURPRISE. THEY WILL RUN AND HIDE AND COWER UNDER YOUR MIGHTY FURY
[Now in First Person View in the Pod] Roadie’s Helmet develops a fault and she has to hit it in the side twice with her hand before the HUD fully renders. Roadie’s breathing gets increasingly loud.
VOICE OVER: THE SECOND ONE IS WHEN THE ENEMY HAS SPOTTED YOU BEFORE YOU SPOT THEM. TRUST ME, YOUR DAY WILL SUCK.
Suddenly, the sound of Anti-Air gunfire can be heard coming up from below and the pod begins to rock. Roadie struggles to steer it away from the projectiles.
VOICE OVER: NOW THERE IS AN OLD ODST SAYING: ‘THEY ALWAYS KNOW YOUR COMING.’
-The pod lands violently and Roadie comes out of it dizzy and disoriented and has to hit her helmet to get it working again.
ANY QUESTIONS? SAY SOMETHING.

4 things, Real Paragraphs, Less caps, create the full story before script and come back when it’s Finished

This sounds like an intro to a game, but it’s a decent start. Needs more outlining.